Completely revamping the first two pages of my story was fun, but the third dragged on and on. I'm not all that happy with it, but it's a heck of a lot better than the first draft. The new style I'm writing in has made my previous climax (involving boogers... yes, it's a young boy's story) obsolete. So now I have to finish it differently. That's OK - I have to make the middle completely different too, and I just made the beginning different... so I should be used to it by the time I get to the end, which shouldn't happen for another hundred pages or so. I hope.